Goa Traffic — and how to tell a bad book from a good one

I should have guessed this one was going to be a bad read. I had so many clues. And yet, something made me pick Goa Traffic, quite unthinkingly. Perhaps it was the cover that got to me. It seemed interesting, pale yellow with what looked like the door to one of those familiar old Portuguese houses. As such, I am one of those suckers for anything local. I’m the idiot that buys expensive tickets to watch terrible movies shot in Goa, just so I can point at various scenes and go “Hey! Look! Its Panjim!” and such like, and feel chuffed at the sense of familiarity. Elated that my little town had yet another shot at three hours in fame.

But I digress. This is a post on how to tell a bad book from a good one. And lesson #1 is never to give in to such irrational thought. “The cover said Goa Traffic, and I thought it might be about life in Goa” is not good enough reason.

There is always the blurb one can refer to. And by refer, I mean one must read the entire blurb, not just the first two lines. And one must most definitely not convince oneself on the quality of said book based on those two lines. That’s lesson #2.

I probably sound like one of those snooty, over-aesthetic art-directors (and I have worked with quite a few to know what they’re like), when I say this, but font matters. Lesson #3: Never trust a book that is set in Times New Roman. For those in the know, double paragraph spacing is a big no-no. As is bad kerning and leaving one too many orphan words.

Eurgh. So many clues! What were they thinking when they typeset this book? Err, what was I thinking when I bought this book? Clearly, I wasn’t.

Assume for a moment that you are spectacularly stupid, like me, and in a moment of weakness you go ahead and ignore cardinal rules and purchase the book. But don’t be like me when it comes to opening the book and despite realising, within twenty pages, that it is a trite story, really badly written and full of inconsistencies, continue reading it till the end. Lesson #4: Conquer your completion OCD!

Lesson #5 is to look out for awkward Indianisms that creep in when writing out a white persons character. If a book feels like one of those Karan Johar movies where the Indian family is hanging out with a bunch of foreigners, who some how talk and behave like Indians — worrying about being unmarried, not having babies in time, and what-will-people-say-if-I-sleep-with-him — listen to those alarm bells of horror that are going off in your head. Shut the book.

I think a lot of Indian (okay this one is part-Indian, it seems) authors have a long way to go before they get comfortable writing about all things alike. In Goa Traffic, I could sense the authors keen familiarity with all things Goan — the bhaji-pao, the Mandovi river and lazy ferry, the Saturday Night market shrouded in a cloud of gaanja, the colourful streets of Baga and Calangute lined with stalls selling useless stuff — and yet when her central character (a British girl) goes back to UK, the story read like an awkward tot, learning to walk, fumbling her way around to find the ground beneath her feet. If you’re not comfortable writing like a single girl in UK, don’t bother taking your story there! It’s simple, no?

If the central crisis of the story hasn’t started even 9 chapters in, do not bother waiting for it to unfold. Lesson #6 is to know when to stop reading. Goa Traffic is written in that quintessentially flowerly, meandering style that writers sometimes mistake as excellent storytelling. Just because you can over-describe situations and scenarios, and you can tell long and winding back stories, flit from one scene to the next and waste about 10 chapters worth of everybody’s time before you get to the crux of the story, doesn’t mean you are a good storyteller. And if you’ve wasted 9 chapters drawing out elaborate plot lines, detailing intricate aspects of every characters life, and in the bargain left your reader wondering where this is all going, it does not mean your story has that air of mystery that will keep the reading reading on for more. Your reader, if he/she is still reading, is probably a twit like me. Obsessed with finishing the book, just because it has been started.

And that is pretty much all that got me through the book. The irrational need to finish the damned thing.

Okay, jokes apart, Goa Traffic was as forgettable as the cover was first impressive. It was a silly story, told with very little skill (in narrative style, storytelling and language), and it is a book I really should have stopped reading. But I had bought it, and I am always obsessed about finishing what I start, and so I did. It helped that once all the pointless back-stories and weird connections she was trying to make, all the terribly fake dramatic lives of her various character had unfolded, and the actual action began, the book was 3/4th done. Finishing it off then, was a half a days read.

When I finally decided I cannot prolong my misery any more and would just get down to it and finish off the book in one sitting, I began to realise that the problem was probably that this started off as a short story, and was somehow stretched to be a novel. Lesson #7: If a novel feels like a short story drawn out too long, its not worth your time. The tragedy is that, if it were written well, it would have made a good short story. Maybe.

And finally, lesson #8: If your head and your heart are repeatedly telling you to give it up, listen! Like MinCat said, life is too short to sit around reading shitty books. Pay heed, shut book and move on to the next thing.


19 thoughts on “Goa Traffic — and how to tell a bad book from a good one

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  3. Two series of books cured me of my OCD with finishing books – Shades of Grey and The Meluha series. Chetan Bhagat is highly over-rated and has set a trend where all these IIM/IIT guys think they know how to write a good story. That being said his blog is good so what happens when he writes a book? Maybe he has a ghost writer for the blog.
    There are a few good author’s out there. I’ve just started Blood Red Saree by Ashok Banner and it seems like a good read.


    1. Amen on Shades of Grey and Melhua. Both series had me yawning within the first few chapters of Book 1. I just couldnt get past them. Actually come to think of it, those books didnt even get me to stick with my OCD! They were that bad. Yes, CB is overrated, and the husband was telling me just yesterday that AMish does not write the Melhua series himself, they are all ghostwritten.


  4. enjoyed your self deprecating humor. fortunately i am not compelled to finish-in fact it really doesn’t take much for me to give up on a book. and you are so right about the font…it may seem minor but it does influence your reading experience.


  5. Haha….well that was a day or so of your life that you’ll never get back!!
    You sound like your cuz with the Times New Roman thing. I do concur with the double-spacing thing though! You really must overcome your OCD……life is to short to 1. Read bad books, 2. Drive too slowly and 3. Drink bad wine……..


    1. I have 2 and 3 covered. Because OCD doesnt get in the way there. Completig books movies and TV shows that i start no matter how bad they get — yes that one needs to be worked on.

      And yeah this isnt the first time someone has said vish and i are alike. Apparently we have way more similarities than meets the eye :O


  6. Saajida

    This is hilarious! I’ve typeset novels before and totally agree – TNR font is simply the best way to put off readers from your book.
    Your post has been a good read, thanks :)


  7. shweta

    if you thought that book was bad you should read ‘Cloud 9 minus one’. Its written by one of those IIM graduates who think that with an MBA degree they have also developed some hidden talent to write books…I don’t know what made me buy that book and read it..! I would have sworn off books by Indian authors, but thankfully I got my hands on Immortals of Meluha,albeit a bit late..What an awesome book…so deliciously written..I’m reading Secrets of the Nagas now which is as racily written as the first one…So refreshing to read this genre of mythology fiction..


    1. Accha you liked Immortals? I also caught on to the hype very late, and Romi gifted VC a copy of both for his last bday, I think. I tried reading and trying to see what the big deal was.. But it was just too Chetan Bhagat like for me. I couldnt get through it :-/ Maybe I didnt try hard enough.. but it was too Matrix meets Mythology for me..just trying too hard to be cool for my liking


      1. shweta

        That was the best part about the book i thought…the gods trying to be cool and calling each other bastards..;) I just liked the way the book was presented…usually mythology is so darn boring..this was just different…anyway…the first book is much better than the second…the second starts off well and somehow takes a turn to become a karan joharish movie…now since i’ve read the first two I have to read the third!and the OCD continues….:)


        1. Oh yes, youre totally right. I think by making it a very accessible and dramatic plot, he has succeeded in making mythology very down to earth and easy for folks like us to understand. I was just telling someone today, over lunch, that I give him full credit for the idea of turning an age old mythological story previously thought only to be for intellectuals or “Sanskritized” people, into a very accessible and everyday story — which is hat it really is! But I think the story/style just didnt appeal to me. He is clearly doing something right because he has become the highest selling Indian author..Maybe I am the duffer that is missing something!


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